Not good ones. A story should be tight. There shouldn't be extraneous bits for no reason. If this guy has a Doomsday Device, it's gotta go off, or the whole story is ruined.
and if that's the case I will find the guy who wrote it, and duct-tape him to the ceiling until he learns better.
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and if that's the case I will find the guy who wrote it, and duct-tape him to the ceiling until he learns better.
[So there.]